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zerateul
2026-05-17 05:17:23Stupid settings like mc can extract plant and animal chakra by using chakra refining technique on them and achieve wood release. Write logical things, author who has fish brains for human's
zerateul
2026-05-17 05:11:39Cliche plots like parents,villagers sacrifice to heaven. He wants to protect his mother and then leaves her to join navy after saying this. Idiot, single celled creature
zerateul
2026-05-17 05:10:28Atleast give mc a cheat. He can only reach elite jonin level and can't go further
zerateul
2026-05-17 05:08:31Mc always in passive situation and gets the hardest beating in every fight. Also author makes entire one piece world against the Uchiha clan since he doesn't know how to create his own plot
zerateul
2026-05-17 05:05:33Author turn male mc into a girl due to his fetish. Also mc goes to fight Imu twice and survives due to plot armour. Stupidity. No main plot,just wandering to chat with one piece characters.
SHOW
2026-05-17 05:04:43穿書寫不知劇情，那至少主角本人要足夠有趣，這本只算普通。
到火盃報名那邊實在欠考慮，你沒系統發任務也不急賺錢，靠穿越者靈魂穿過年齡限制，完全沒想被查的風險啊。
Moonlisa
2026-05-17 04:47:59還德智體群美勞？根本就是一個沒屁用沒能力沒腦子的智障。幼稚園小朋友都比她有腦子有膽識，這女主真讓人看不下去。
梁家齊
2026-05-17 00:43:29看簡介就繃不住了，作者讓系統用強制抹殺威脅主角來推進劇情，這是10年前就淘汰的套路
還有女友出軌，給自己帶綠帽好玩嗎？
QQ"
2026-05-16 23:59:51現在主角都太功利了 沒好處但正面的事都不幹 有點小小的權力就拿捏要好處 能偷雞摸狗搶資源毫不猶豫 能佔到便宜就盡量佔 雖然算不上壞人 但也不是好人 表面還要扮演一個正派人物 虛偽已經是現代主角代名詞 主要標榜不吃虧只佔便宜 典型屌絲思維 所以屌絲只要成為主角就成為自己最討厭的人 有沒有發現 現在的主角 跟平常的那些虛偽小人是一個樣 主要是讀者自動帶入主角視角 所以沒發現
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bob52y
